Friday, July 21, 2017

Peter and The Police...

  This episode is rated PG-13 for some mild language and adult content.

Once EMS got on the scene they quickly rushed Willow to the hospital, time was not on their side and they needed to get to the ER pronto if she has any chances of surviving this malicious evil act that has happened to her. 
 Meanwhile CSU is already on the scene documenting and dusting for prints. Peter is still at his apartment, the officer would not allow him to leave with Willow, he is furious but still tries to hold it together.
 *Peter* "C'mon...This is fucking ridiculous! Can't 
I just answer questions later?..."
 *Officer Pete* "I can assure you that they are doing all they can to keep her alive..."
*Peter* "You don't get it, we just got back together...I need to be there."
Officer Pete holds Peter back from leaving, as much as he 
would like to let him go he has to follow procedures. 
 *Officer Pete* "As soon as I get an update I promise I will let you know, until then sit tight. My detectives should be here any moment and they will have questions for you to answer..."
 And just like clockwork the detectives are on the scene Hayden and his partner Jennifer are being accompanied by another detective who is visiting from out of town and considering transferring.
 *Jennifer* "So James, not even in town a few hours and we're already called out...
What do ya think?..."
*James* "Definitely not as quiet at Ash Harbor..."
Hayden walks to the doorway and sees one of the CSU 
crew members hard at work already.
*Hayden* "Hey Monique, y'all got here fast..."
*Monique* "Yeah we weren't to far away so just decided to head straight on over...
So watch your step."
Back to Jennifer and James...
*Jennifer* "Well if you're looking for a more fast paced job this is the place to be...
What made you decide to transfer, if you don't mind me asking..."
*James* "Oh, uh...Personal reasons, mostly. Plus I needed a change of pace,
so yeah New Orleans is definitely a good choice..."
He obviously does not want to talk about why he is down here, so Jennifer does not push the conversation farther. They continue inside and she introduces him to Monique, while Hayden talks with Matt, 
who is photographing the crime scene.
*Hayden* "So what do we got, Matt?..."
*Matt* "One female stabbing victim, no signs of forced entry boyfriend said the door was open when he found her. EMS got her off to the hospital, last I heard..."
*Hayden* "Okay, any signs yet of the perp?.."
*Matt* "None, whoever attacked her was smart. They touched nothing and stepped carefully...We'll know more once Monique is done sweeping for prints..."
Jennifer greets and smiles at Monique, introducing
 her quickly to her James.
*Jennifer* "Monique, this is James. He's a possible transfer from Ash Harbor, so if he has any questions, it's okay to answer. He'll be working this case with us..."
*Monique smiles* "Okay...Welcome to New Orleans, James..."
James nods and smiles thanking her for the welcome, then the two detectives continue to walk inside the small apartment. It is now mighty busy in there and Peter is still in a panic, 
he wants to get to the hospital.
*Peter* "Hey, I free to go now? I'd like to know what the hell is going on..."
Hayden holds up his hand, he is looking down at the pool of blood on the floor. It will be a miracle if doctors can save this girl he thinks to himself. Peter meanwhile is getting even more upset and impatient. These cops stand around like there is nothing more pressing at the moment and Peter just begins to loose it again.
*Peter* "You can't just fucking hold me hostage! I need to know if she is okay...
Please! I need to know."
This part of the job is always rough. Of course they would love to let him go, but if they have any chances of catching whoever did this, then they need Peter's cooperation. He is the only one who can answer questions right now. If Willow pulls through 
they will have plenty for her as well.
*Hayden* "Listen I know you're upset but the best possible way you can help right now is here with us, Pete will keep you updated with news from the hospital....She's in good hands."
Meanwhile James is taking in the crime scene, 
and strikes up conversation with Matt.
*James* "Pretty brutal scene, here..."
*Matt* "Yeah, poor girl...I don't think she saw it coming."
*James* "And the perp?.."
*Matt* "The perp was a pro or they just got that lucky...We'll know more once we're done."
James continues to study the scene, while Matt takes pictures. His mind drifts off to Julianna for a moment, reminding himself she is not here, and he cannot chat with her about work to get her input. She always approached things differently as a detective and he liked he loves that about her.
But enough of that, she is not here and they are not on speaking terms right now thanks to his bull headed stupidity and his rash jump to conclusions. The flash of the camera brings him out of his 
trance and back to the here and now.

*James* "So the boyfriend was picking up food at 3 O'clock in the morning?..."
*Matt* "Yeah that's what he claims. Let's hope we find something...
cause it's gonna take a miracle for that girl to pull through."

*Jennifer* "Hey, Pete...So you were first on the scene?..."
*Pete* "Yeah, I came in first. The call was originally for a possible disturbance, neighbor
downstairs was woken by loud noises..."
*Jennifer* "So did you see anyone suspicious when you came up?..."
*Pete* "No nothing, it was quiet..."
While Jennifer gets Pete's side of the story,
James now wants to know more as well. He steps carefully and heads over to where Hayden is standing. James thinks to himself, well he looks genuinely upset, and again he thinks of Julianna and how upset he made her when he accused her so rashly of cheating. 
Focus James, focus!
*Peter* "Oh gawd, I think I'm gonna be sick!...Please just let me go, please!.."
 *Hayden* "Just take slow deep breaths. I really need you to focus, like I said the best thins you can do for her right now, is here with us...We need to know what you saw when you came in."
 Peter tries to calm down, the idea of not knowing if she is okay, then seeing and reliving her lying in that pool of blood is making him sick. He takes a deep breath but he has trouble slowing it down, 
his nerves are so rattled...
*James* "Just stay strong...That's the best thing you can do for her right now."
*Peter* "Please just let me go, I can't be in here anymore..."
*Hayden* "Why don't we chat in the other room before we head out of here?"
*Peter pauses for a moment* "Fine..."
 The two detectives try to console Peter, but the last thing they need is him contaminating the crime scene with anymore bodily fluids. James pushes the bedroom door open, and Peter staggers through...
 Hayden is pretty sure now Peter is not their prime suspect, but he has got to know something. Why the hell was he out 
for food in the middle of the night?...
 *Hayden in a low voice* " think he's involved?..."
 *James in a hushed tone* "I dunno... But we need to find out."
Peter does not hear them, he is too consumed by his own guilt of leaving her and letting this tragedy happen to her in the first place...
James allows Hayden to pass through the doorway first. Hayden steps in and scans the room, his eyes meet with the ashtray over on top of the dresser. The room all is over neat and tidy except the bed and the disheveled bed sheets.
*Hayden* "You know, you might be able to breath better if you lay off the cigarettes..."
 Peter snaps and realizes that Willow must have hidden away his bong and pot before she was attacked. Peter has a hidey-hole where he usually keeps it. Willow and Luke are the only two
 who know where it is.
*Peter under his breath* "Oh gawd baby, bless you Willow..."
 He sighs and feels a wave of nausea pass, Willow saved his ass again...And here Peter is stuck helpless, wondering if she
 is still fighting to stay alive.
 *Hayden* "So tell me why were you out for food at 3 O'clock in the morning?...Is that the usual time you wake up?..."
*Peter* "I work nights, so I'm usually just heading home at that time..."
*Hayden* "But you weren't working tonight..."
*Peter* "No, I called in sick...Willow and I just got back together...We...we've been in bed all night. "
*Hayden* "So you two were here alone together all night until you decided to leave for breakfast?..."
*Peter* "Yes, I was hungry.  I usually eat breakfast then come home and fall asleep."
James holds the door open for Jennifer as she comes into the bedroom as well. CSU continues their work in the living room.
*Hayden* "Okay, so why not just eat something here, or wait till is light out?
 I mean it's 3 O'clock in the morning..."
*Peter* "Have you seen my fridge?! It's empty. I don't keep much in there and I was hungry."
*Hayden* "Okay...So you leave to get food, you come back find your girlfriend
lying there on the floor...Tell me what's going through your mind."
*Peter* "I fucking lost my shit, I didn't expect to see what I saw! I shoulda never left,
she begged me to stay...shit!"
 James and Jennifer also join their conversation. Jennifer stands next to her partner while, James takes the rear, stands 
back while they ask the questions.
 *Jennifer* "Is there anyone that maybe wanted to hurt you or your girlfriend?"
*Peter sighs Willow was right again* "Shelby-Lynn..."
*Hayden* "Who's she?..."
*Peter* "She's my neighbor from down the hall. She's a know...obsessed with me..."
*Hayden* "You mean she's stalking you?..Or are you cheating with this Shelby-Lynn?
You think that's why she's the attacker? How did you get that nasty bruise on your face?"
 *Peter* "Fuck you! It was a few fucking times and it was long before
Willow and I got back together.
*James grabbing Peter's arm* "Woah, calm down there, buddy...We just wanna
know what's going as much as you do."
 *Jennifer* "We realize you're upset, just tell us the truth, have you and Willow had any confrontations with Shelby-Lynn or anyone else?.."
 *Peter* " was about a week ago. Shelby broke into my apartment again. I've changed my locks and all but she still sneaks in here...Willow came home from from being gone for work and she found me here trying to get Shelby to leave. So Willow went ballistic on her and chewed her out told her to leave, she finally did."
*Hayden* "So if this Shelby-Lynn girl was breaking in why didn't you call
 the cops, get a restraining order?..."
*Peter with reluctance* "Cause she's a fucking kid! She's like 18, still in high school...I didn't know until it was too late, by then she went all stalker on me. It's fucking embarrassing
not to mention the fact that I...ya know...shit!...C'mon do we have to
do this now? I really want to know if Willow is okay. Please let me go."
*Hayden* "I'm sorry but you're gonna have to come down to the station with us..."
*Peter* "What the fuck?! Right now? Am I under arrest?...You told me I could leave!"
*James* "It's standard need to come with us. You're still
a suspect until we can rule you out."
*Peter* "I didn't do this!..."
*James* "We can arrest you if you want. We've got enough probable cause,
but I strongly suggest you come willingly."
The three detectives leave with Peter, who is not happy at all about the situation. He has no idea how Willow is or if she is even still alive. Officer Pete stays behind while the crime scene unit finishes their job of gathering information and evidence.

To be continued...
Thanks so much for tuning in and reading. I wanted this episode to be much longer but I have had a very busy week with doctor appointments for the kids, family engagements and all that mommy business. So instead of skipping a week I went and just did half of it for now, 
hang tight and stay with me!
Thank you so much for all your support, likes, and comments!

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Hayden Jones 
 Age: 32
Birthday: September 16
Hair: Black
Eyes: Brown
Height: 5ft 11"
Occupation: Officer/Detective with the New Orleans Police Dept. 
Hometown: New Orleans, LA
Currently: New Orleans, LA
Marital Status: Single/Divorced
  Currently Dating: Courtney Benoit
Children: None
Hayden is a very hardworking and devoted man to his city.  Became a cop right after he graduated high school and has been working his way up the ranks since.  Although he went to high school with his finance Carmen they never dated as teenagers but were friends. It wasn't until about 10 years later that they realized they wanted to be more than just friends.  Hayden enjoys a good game of football and cracking a case. He is a very honest, straight forward person, and is not afraid to tell you when you screwed up.  
Carmen and Hayden recently divorced, both of them worked long hours and slowly drifted apart.  Hayden's time was especially limited being a police detective, so sadly Carmen began to drift away. She ended up having a short affair then soon realized this marriage was not working. So when she got a new job offer in another state and Hayden refused to go, they ended it.
 Courtney Benoit
 Age: 35
Birthday: August 10th
Hair: Brown 
Height: 5' 3"
Occupation: Assistant District Attorney
Hometown: New Orleans
Currently: New Orleans, Louisiana
Marital Status: Divorced
Currently dating: Hayden Jones
Children: None

 Jennifer Lloyd
Birthday: December 2nd
Hair: light brown
Eyes: Hazel green
Height: 5' 10"
Occupation: New Orleans Police Detective
Hometown: Queens, New York
Currently: New Orleans, Louisiana
Marital Status: Single/Divorced
Children: daughters Kelly(15) and Adrianna(13)
Jennifer and her daughters are my daughters dolls, so she tells me all about them and how they will be in my episodes, haha!

Also appearing in these upcoming episodes is a character from 
Ash Harbor Residents 

James Tatum
 Age: 36
Birthday: January 12
Hair: brownish black
Eyes: blue
Height: 6'2
Occupation:  Detective
Hometown: Charlotte, NC
Currently: New Orleans, Louisiana
Marital Status:Divorced from Angelina Another and now separated from Julianna who he's been dating since February .
Children: none 
Hobbies: James loves jogging and deer hunting. When he's not busy he loves a good beach day and surf fishing. Also has his pilots license and enjoys flying.
You can also catch up with James and all the others on Mandee's Instagram account.

Friday, July 14, 2017

Peter and The Pounding Heartache...Part 2

This episode is rated R for violence, 
graphic content, and some language.

Willow immediately swings the door open expecting to see Peter standing on the other side, but it is not him.  The smile quickly drains from her face as she takes in who is standing there.
*Willow* "Wh..."

Before she can get another word out she is abruptly shoved
 back inside of the apartment. Willow pedals backwards trying hard to stay on her feet, she quickly catches herself on the living room chair.
But she is still not quick enough, at the same time she was shoved a warm sensation starts to move down her leg her attacker also slashing at her with a blade.  Willow begins to feel the deep sting of the cut now, but she cannot recover quick enough,
and her attacker strikes again. 
Weakening her more...
Willow opens her eyes and struggles to stay upright, but this second attack struck her hard in the lower abdomen. The pain is intense. Her attacker stands back waiting to pounce again. Realizing now that she has to get away somehow, Willow uses the chair to try and get farther away. Her attacker showing no mercy from the start...
Her first instinct is to cry out for help but she's out of breath. 
The pain is intensifying with every inhale and exhale.
*Willow* "He...H...elp..."
Willow continues to use the chair as support to try and get away from the attacks but they relentlessly strike again...Like a calculating cat that is circling it's prey waiting for it to weaken.
 Willow cries out in pain, her eyes always closing as they strike 
down on her, this one was deeper than the last two.
She hits the floor with a hard thud, the pain spreading like wildfire her body is now way too weak to get all the way back up. She can sense them towering over her, just waiting to come down hard on her again. Willow crawls towards the table, instinct telling her to keep on trying to get away. The only sounds she can hear is the spastic throbbing of her heart, and the sharp intake of breath, as her body reacts to the violent attacks.
*Willow* "H...elp..."
Willow lays one hand on the table, attempting to pull her body upright. She is weak, but she cannot give up! Where is Peter? He should be back by now!
Then without any mercy she is struck again. Willow just 
about nearly blackouts from the intense hot pain...
She can still sense them standing over her, as she lays there. Willow knows she cannot get up anymore. Her body is beyond weak, 
and is failing now...Her attacker lies in wait
Then her mind drifts to Peter and wonders if her attacker struck him first, jumped him outside somewhere took him by surprise. She sees the box that fell from the table when she was pushed 
down only moments ago.
It takes all her energy to pull her body just ever
 so closer so that the box is in reach but she has to try!
 Try and stay alive...
And with the last bit of strength she has, Willow reaches 
for the box. She grabs at the corner that is closest to her.
She then swings her arm up and back trying to fight off 
her attacker. Who is silent, they never speak, with eyes so very
 cold and calculating...
But they instantly slap the box out of Willow's hand and send it flying back to the floor again. Willow collapses and sobs, she is worried about Peter...Where is he? Did they get to him outside the door? She did not see a body in the hallway...
Her attacker is about to strike down again, she can feel their presence coming closer. Then the sound of the old elevator motor hums, this old building carries sound easily and her attacker immediately stops.  
Then she can hear very silent footsteps retreat away.
 Knowing now she is alone, Willow tries to pull her body up at least to maybe sit up. She needs to cry out for help but that is a struggle as well. Down the hallway the squeak of the elevator signals that the doors are opening...
*Willow* "P...P...Pet-er....H..elp....Mmmee"
She collapses again, whatever energy she had 
left is all gone now. Everything begins to go black, Willow struggles to stay conscious...Her mind drifts to Peter again and how happy they were just moments ago. She doesn't even hear Peter's footsteps as they approach the doorway...
*Peter* "Babe?...Why is the door?...."
When Peter's eyes finally follow the trail of blood into his apartment he spots Willow there laying in a pool of blood. He is not
 sure if she is dead or alive...
*Peter's voice in sheer panic* "Oh my gawd! Willow?!.....Willow!..."
 He screams her name aloud, panic resonating in his voice.
 Immediately and without thought of it he drops the bag of fast food, letting it hit the floor...
 He quickly dashes across the apartment floor he 
cannot get to her quick enough.
*Peter* "Willow!!...Willow!..."

He almost has to slide to a stop, running so quickly in such a short distance to get to her side. The whole time Peter has not stopped calling out her name, the panic in his voice rising as he gets closer to her.
 *Peter* "Willow?!....No, no, no! C'mon...Speak to me, baby! Willow?!...Willow!"
 His cries for her become more distraught as she does 
not respond to his voice
 *Peter* "Willow?!..."
Peter starts to turn her body slowly and Willow finally opens her eyes. His constant cry for her bringing her back to reality. He is alive! He's okay, oh thank God he is okay! She thinks...
 *Willow* "P...P..Peter?..."
 Her reply is barely audible but Peter hears it. His heart is pounding in his chest, he does not know what to do. It looks bad, she sounds bad...Peter slowly turns her body cradling it gently. She is totally limp in his arms, she is weak. Tears begin clouding his vision.
*Willow* "P..Peter?..."
Willow's vision is a blur too, she knows it's Peter by his voice, 
her eyes strain to focus in on his face. Then they finally do find his face, and Willow perks up just a tad and she smiles so very briefly...Peter does too, relieved to see her responsive.
 *Peter in tears* "It's okay, baby...It's okay....I'm here."
*Willow* "I...I'm..sss..."
He pulls her in tighter, cradles her onto his lap. 
Peter can feel tears welling up again, stinging his 
eyes as he tries to hold them back...
*Peter* "No,, it's okay....Just stay with me. S...stay with me!..."
*Willow* ", P...Peter"
*Peter through hard sobs* "I know, baby....It's okay, I'm not mad!...
Just stay with me, keep talking...I'm gonna get you some help!"
Peter's chest feels likes it is gonna burst, he tries so hard to hold back the tears and sobbing, but he can no longer. If only he had stayed...Why did he have to leave?! Leave her vulnerable to such an awful attack! He pulls his phone from his back pocket and hits the emergency number.
*911* "What's your emergency?..."
*Peter through hard sobs* "I need an ambulance! My girlfriend has been stabbed!..."
Peter stays on the line with the 911 operator and 
answers all their routine questions.
*911* "Okay, sit tight sir...I'm getting help out to you."
Willow so badly wants to wrap her arms around him and tell him it will be okay, instead she does the one thing she can do...
*Willow* "'s....not...your...fault..."
*Peter choking up* "It's okay baby, I love you, too...Just stay with me.
Just look at me, focus on my face, Baby..."
Peter is in full panic now, he pulls her up tighter, but that 
fire in those light blue eyes are beginning to dim.
*Peter* "No!...oh gawd,  No!...I never should have left you....Just stay with me...,
Willow!...Look at me Babe, stay with me!..."
 He holds her tight, Willow doesn't have the strength to speak much anymore. Peter knows she is very weak, so he talks to her. He wants her to know that he loves her so deeply and that he is willing to make those changes in his own life just so she could stay in his...
*Peter* "I'm so sorry, Baby...I never knew I could love anyone till I met you, and it scared the shit outta me.  I know I'm not easy to live with and you put up with me, and my crazy shit! All of it...All my fucking baggage...You're an amazing woman...and I will never stop loving you...Remember those babies you wanted? We can have a few of those or however many you want...grow old together...
forever Babe, forever!..."
Willow kinda smiles at that last string of words, 
her eyes lighting up just a tad. She hangs on to those words 
and fights as hard as she can to stay conscious...
*Peter sobbing and rocking* "Willow...No! No!...C'mon...Baby....Stay with me...
I'm getting you help stay with me."
The neighbors below Peter also called the cops after being woken up in the middle of the night by their upstairs neighbor. Officer Pete Singh is the first on the scene, with his gun drawn he
 cautiously enters the apartment.

*Officer Pete* "I need to you step away, hands where I can see them!"
*Peter* "My girlfriend was attacked, she needs help!..."
Officer Pete steps into the apartment to get a better
 look at what is going on.
 *Officer Pete* "Sir, I need you to step I can asses the situation."
Peter decides to comply as the officer also calls for
 an ambulance on his radio...
 *Officer Pete* "I need medics here, pronto!...Got a possible 219...requesting backup."
*Dispatch* "10-4 help is already on the way, officer Pete...Backup is in en route."

*Willow* "P..Peter..."
*Peter* "Hang on baby, stay with me...."

To be continued...

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